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爱吃辣的加拿大大叔雅思托福10多年一线教学中文说得还不错,头像是他家猫在这里分享他原创的雅思写作干货每篇范文都有配音,在同名公众号“英语考试Cat”

你好呀,我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天,给大家带来一个雅思写作小作文的原创范文。

老规矩,以下是正文目录:

1,题目

2,Mac范文

3,范文朗读

4,范文解析

上题:

The table below shows how many tourists from five countries visited Australia in different years from 1991 -1999. (unit: thousands)

- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -

范文音频戳这里

The table illustrates the changes in the number of people travelling to Australia from four countries and one region throughout the 1990s.

Overall, visitors to Australia from all areas witnessed an increase, with those from the UK numbering the most and those from Canada the least.

Despite leading in four out of the five years, the UK, in 1991, had one thousand less visitors to Australia than those from the United States; however, by 1999, the UK had almost doubled its Australia-bound tourists from 1991 levels, coming in at five hundred and nine thousand visitors. Those from the US, though also incrementally and significantly climbing in number, remained below the four hundred thousand mark in the year before the turn of the century, as did the region of ‘other’ European area. Although also seeing an upward trend, tourist numbers from Germany only increased by sixty-five thousand over the nine-year period, with just one hundred forty thousand travelling to Australia in 1999.

Out of all countries and regions, Canada had the fewest travellers to Australia, and in fact, in 1993, had even three thousand less visitors heading to Australia than in 1991, which stood at fifty-one thousand, while in comparison, had only risen by twenty-four thousand eight years later.



- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -

Standard Task 1 Phrases 雅思小作文地道表达积累:


The table illustratesthe changes inthe number ofOverall,witnessed an increasenumbering the mostthe leastlesshad almost doubled(year) levelscoming in atsignificantly climbing in numberremained belowthe (number) mark (point)the year before the turn of the centuryseeing an upward trendonly increased byover the (number)-year periodhad the fewesthad even___ lessstood atin comparisonhad only risen (number years) later by

Vocabulary 高分词汇:


region 地区areas 地区;区域(destination) bound 前往(某地)incrementally 递增significantly 显著地mark (point) 记号;标志(year before) the turn of the century (=1999) 在世纪之交的前一年heading to 前往

Cohesion (C&C words and phrases) 把这些简单的词用好,能帮你在"连贯与衔接"方面轻松拿分:


fromthroughoutOverall,from all, with those fromand those fromDespite leading (gerund)in (number) out of the (number) (years)less ___ than those from; however, byThose from, though alsoand, remained below, as didAlthough also seeing (gerund)over the (number)-year period, with justOut of all, and in fact,Even number less ___than (in), which, while in comparison,Only

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